In many countries, people are influenced by technology they use social sites. What are the advantages and disadvantages
of social sites?
Lifestyle has been changed entirely since technology has spreaded its roots in this modern society. presently, the trend
of using social sites is gaining prevalence all over the world. Here,i would like to account for both merits and demerits of
social sites.
There are manifold benefits of such sites. First and foremost, these sites allow a great deal of communication. To give a specific example, masses use various sites such as facebook,whatsapp and twitter which help them to communicate with their friends and relatives. Consequently, they might make strong bonding with each other. Apart from it, social sites
provide amusement. To illustrate, individual can share their photos, videos and many more on it. As a result, they may make good relationships with their near one or dear one. Last but not least, it also helps to provide general knowledge.
For instance,people come to know about different masses who belong to distinct culture like Canadian,American and so on. Thence, they can enhance the horizon of their knowledge. As it is said that "Knowledge is invaluable power".
On the other hand, it has certain disadvantages. Firstly, social sites enable to create cyber crime. For example, when criminals use it for many purposes as robbery,explosion and escaping from prison that enrich the crime. Hence, culprit can increase which is a major concern in front of society.
From my notion,both aspects have own significance. few individual ponder that it has myriad that is an pros while others acknowledged that it has various cons. However, it is an advisable for people can become tech-savvy which is helpful for them to gain knowledge.
Finally, it is universally accepted that it has more advantages than disadvantages. People must use it. As, may live keep i touch globally.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'apart from', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212034383954 0.247107183377 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.163323782235 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106017191977 0.0946595960268 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0429799426934 0.0501214627716 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0659025787966 0.0437548338989 151% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.10888252149 0.122226691241 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0229226361032 0.0403226058552 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.0637867968 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025787965616 0.0326793684256 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0487106017192 0.0861772015684 57% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025787965616 0.021408717616 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0200573065903 0.011925033212 168% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1820.0 1933.35771543 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 316.048096192 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.27586206897 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365517241379 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.262068965517 0.28420135186 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186206896552 0.203846283523 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124137931034 0.137316102897 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0637867968 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.037074148 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.56093040696 114% => OK
Word variations: 74.3133656502 60.7387585426 122% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0891783567 149% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0833333333 20.7743622355 58% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6535297949 49.517814964 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8333333333 127.492653851 59% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0833333333 20.7743622355 58% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.791666666667 0.814263465372 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38877755511 182% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.99599198397 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.2902298851 49.1944974215 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.26315789474 1.69124875643 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225102720308 0.332605444948 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0513491082846 0.102741220458 50% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0481858754147 0.0668466124924 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.466061919293 0.534860350844 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157627290131 0.148594505496 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697544571716 0.134430193775 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06212081991 0.0742795772207 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.176746390747 0.324371583561 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.070854084166 0.0638462369009 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991656013793 0.228012699653 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715949072065 0.058150111329 123% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.68436873747 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.