A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people argue that animals should be treated equally as humans and should not be abused in any way, whereas others think that animals are to be used to satisfy the different needs of humans such as food and even research. This essay will discuss both viewpoints followed by reasoned conclusion.
Whether it is human or animal life, both should be respected. Animals are created alongside humans and therefore deserve to be treated well and never be exploited for selfish reasons. Unlike before when some animals are only killed to provide food for people in order to survive, the violence against animals has increased. Worse scenarios happened when some are tortured to give pleasure to people or are hunted just to be converted into a fancy coat or bag for the elites. These actions should never be supported and has to stop as animals, just like humans, have all the rights to live without being harmed.
For the past years, animals had greatly helped people to improve their lives when they graced the dining tables and even laboratory rooms. As a result, nutrients such as protein from animals made men stronger and various medicines are invented through animal researches. One of the best example to this was the creation of antibiotic. However, as abusive as they are, some people had become hungrier for more recipes or innovations that they forgot that animals have their lives to be valued and taken care of too.
In conclusion, animals play an important role in the survival of human race but that does not give everyone the right to abuse these animals. I personally think that animals should receive the same respect as humans
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...le argue that animals should be treated equally as humans and should not be abused in any ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'whereas', 'as to', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228476821192 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.218543046358 0.155533422707 141% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0596026490066 0.0946595960268 63% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0596026490066 0.0501214627716 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.023178807947 0.0437548338989 53% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12582781457 0.122226691241 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0728476821192 0.0403226058552 181% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.32959826177 2.80594681477 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.046357615894 0.0326793684256 142% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0860927152318 0.0861772015684 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0198675496689 0.021408717616 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00993377483444 0.011925033212 83% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1653.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 316.048096192 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90357142857 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385714285714 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271428571429 0.28420135186 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135714285714 0.203846283523 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.075 0.137316102897 55% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32959826177 2.80594681477 83% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 62.1307283281 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5384615385 20.7743622355 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1292242016 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.153846154 127.492653851 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7743622355 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.814263465372 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 48.6813186813 49.1944974215 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.41758241758 1.69124875643 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.519491657174 0.332605444948 156% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0827472764949 0.102741220458 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0564210738177 0.0668466124924 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.549534510072 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.179023935996 0.148594505496 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197612394405 0.134430193775 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130102615133 0.0742795772207 175% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.329220429197 0.324371583561 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0558419307186 0.0638462369009 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.353016955218 0.228012699653 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804840928924 0.058150111329 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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