There has been a dramatic growth in the number of people studying at universities in the last few decades. While some people see this as a positive trend which raises the general level of education within the community, others fear that it is lowering the quality of education.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of the increase in student numbers at university?
Students who enrolled in universities has greatly increased since the last ten years. It is believed to be caused by many people believing that a lot of benefits derive from this. However, there are some who ate skeptical about its positive effects. This essay wil discuss both advantages and disadvantages of higher number of students in universities.
This trend has not started if not for the great effects that it brought to a lot of people and the community. Firstly, studying in university improves the quality of education since these institutions offer variety of courses and even provide well-organized lessons and extensive trainings. For instance, students can choose a specific field where they want to focus their studies with, such as medicine and business. In addition, given the knowledge and skills learned, graduates from universities are offered with more employment opportunities since the corporate world and medical societies today hire more applicants with higher qualifications. In other words, you have to earn a degree from a university to be able to be employed in a well-known company. Furthermore, as students from universities increase, the society's population of professionals also rise, making it a stronger country with higher literacy and competency.
Aside from the advantages, the growth in the population of university enrollees also poses some drawbacks. Top of the list would be financial risks. As studying in a university is a bit costly, some families might find it hard to support their children to school. For example, one semester of a business course in University of Chicago already costs $10,000. As a result, much pressure is given to the students to finish college and also to the government to extend help for its citizens. Lastly, studying in a university means longer years in school so instead of having a job to help their families earlier, to some they become a burden.
In conclusion, the growth in the number of college students is financially challenging to families in the community. However, the persona and professional growth that it can offer is definitely worth the chalenge. For these reasons, I think that the advantages outweigh these disadvantages.
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Message: The proper name in singular (wil) must be used with a third-person verb: 'discusses'.
Suggestion: discusses
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'lastly', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'of course', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259541984733 0.247107183377 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.142493638677 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0737913486005 0.0946595960268 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0508905852417 0.0501214627716 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0356234096692 0.0437548338989 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139949109415 0.122226691241 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0381679389313 0.0403226058552 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02831444132 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0381679389313 0.0326793684256 117% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.111959287532 0.0861772015684 130% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0101781170483 0.021408717616 48% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00763358778626 0.011925033212 64% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2225.0 1933.35771543 115% => OK
No of words: 355.0 316.048096192 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.2676056338 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.405633802817 0.374742101984 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.329577464789 0.28420135186 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.256338028169 0.203846283523 126% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152112676056 0.137316102897 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02831444132 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.037074148 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557746478873 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 61.9488958755 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6842105263 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0743307431 49.517814964 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.105263158 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.947368421053 0.814263465372 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 51.6419570052 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.91111111111 1.69124875643 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446293850235 0.332605444948 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0809508044658 0.102741220458 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0716976689357 0.0668466124924 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.473839157473 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.106846936521 0.148594505496 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172708657358 0.134430193775 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10854444895 0.0742795772207 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.378358609698 0.324371583561 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0469002204026 0.0638462369009 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3338700716 0.228012699653 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657496502283 0.058150111329 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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