Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is to address it at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, it is common to see that a new environmental protection agreement has been signed in United Nation from the news. Therefore, some people start to wonder there is nothing they can do to protect the environment, and the tax they paid to the country for protecting environment was also useless. However, I doubt that those people’s idea was correct.
To begin with, United Nation is a powerful organization to lead almost every countries on earth to follow the newest policy, which can reduce the pollution and protect the environment more efficiently. For example, the Kyoto Agreement, that orders not only the developed countries but also developing counties to watch and control their carbon emission during the certain years. It is impossible to compare a single country’s effort to the group of nations’ contribution. Furthermore, UN has the resource from all nations to enable the agreement to work: the wealthy budget and the advanced technologies. Those elements can not be equipped by a single nation.
But it is not to say that, individual country or people can not do anything. The effort of combination between citizen and nations can not be ignored. Taking China as an example, there are 20% of entire population on the earth are in this country. If the government could encourage their citizens to pay closer attention to the environmental protection, using recycle bags to prevent from the white-pollution, purchasing hy-bird cars to reduce the green gas emission and avoiding use of disposable products, then it can be significantly positive effort to the world wide environmental issue.
In sum, it is convincing that, the international cooperation can provide the generally correct direction to protect the environment, however, the individual also can not be ignored because the effort from them is also the key to solve this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
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Line 5, column 561, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...be significantly positive effort to the world wide environmental issue. In sum, it is c...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'for example', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240579710145 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.159420289855 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0753623188406 0.0946595960268 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0608695652174 0.0501214627716 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.031884057971 0.0437548338989 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0753623188406 0.122226691241 62% => OK
Participles: 0.0347826086957 0.0403226058552 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.09328196013 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0579710144928 0.0326793684256 177% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.115942028986 0.0861772015684 135% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0260869565217 0.021408717616 122% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00579710144928 0.011925033212 49% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1883.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.25581395349 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.398671096346 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.299003322259 0.28420135186 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.222591362126 0.203846283523 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.156146179402 0.137316102897 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09328196013 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574750830565 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 61.6213767293 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 23.1538461538 20.7743622355 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.256624673 49.517814964 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.846153846 127.492653851 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7743622355 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 53.0541783798 49.1944974215 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.3908045977 1.69124875643 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.485022241901 0.332605444948 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0980770536937 0.102741220458 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.068286055701 0.0668466124924 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.5598437585 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.217071635557 0.148594505496 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209404629826 0.134430193775 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122964669916 0.0742795772207 166% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.497840394411 0.324371583561 153% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0369569956338 0.0638462369009 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.365663208452 0.228012699653 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280992566829 0.058150111329 48% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.