Issue: Nations should suspend govt. funding for
the arts when significant numbers of their
citizens are hungry and unemployed.
The author in the above issue talks about suspending government
funding for arts for the welfare of the hungry and unemployment. As
per my perspective, I would like to say that suspending funding for
arts will not be best option for welfare of the citizens. There are
multiple reason for my disagreement with this view. I will try and enable
my view in the above paragraph.
Firstly, The above statement indicates that we should stop funding for
the arts for the welfare of the citizens. But as the above statement
suggest, We cannot take it for the granted that there will be increase
in the number of the employment and hungry. A specific survey must be
carried out for the funding in arts and then this brutal step should be
taken.
Secondly, As Tourism plays a major role in the nation economy. If we
stop funding of the arts the tourism will also be get effected due to
this and nation income will be unbalanced due to this. An appropriate
survey of the dependence on the tourism must be made to make an
decession.Arts are the beauty of any nation. They are also called as
true jewels of the nation. By abounding them, It can end to the Indian
culture. Also if the funding is done than also it is not sure that it will
help for the welfare of the people.
Thirdly, Government should carry out a specific survey for the
investment done on different resources of arts to that of the result
obtain due to this. Yet more investment done but it could not make it’s
make a major role for the contribution, Then the government should
stop funding for that resource. Thus due to this national income would
be saved. Eventually, Development of the Nation lies in the
development of the nation. So It may give a major effect for the
welfare of the nation. But on this assumption, We cannot risk for the
nation.
Thus to wrap discussion over this issues, So consolidating all the
perspectives in one, I would like to say that all the decision should be
taken by government to fight the national problems have to very
careful and very much consciously only after observing all the thing in
one, all the aftereffects of what will be their after decision. And As
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Funding
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...e to say that suspending funding for arts will not be best option for welfare of ...
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Suggestion: be the best
...suspending funding for arts will not be best option for welfare of the citizens. The...
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Suggestion: try to
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...ith this view. I will try and enable my view in the above paragraph. Firstly...
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... granted that there will be increase in the number of the employment and hungry...
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... and then this brutal step should be taken. Secondly, As Tourism plays a major ...
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...ays a major role in the nation economy. If we stop funding of the arts the tour...
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...ism will also be get effected due to this and nation income will be unbalanced du...
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Suggestion: Arts
...sm must be made to make an decession.Arts are the beauty of any nation. They are ...
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Suggestion: True
... any nation. They are also called as true jewels of the nation. By abounding them...
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Suggestion: Culture
...nding them, It can end to the Indian culture. Also if the funding is done than also ...
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...m, It can end to the Indian culture. Also if the funding is done than also it is ...
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...han also it is not sure that it will help for the welfare of the people. Third...
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Suggestion: Obtain
...ources of arts to that of the result obtain due to this. Yet more investment done b...
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...ribution, Then the government should stop funding for that resource. Thus due to ...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...ould stop funding for that resource. Thus due to this national income would be...
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...us due to this national income would be saved. Eventually, Development of the N...
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Suggestion: Development
...evelopment of the Nation lies in the development of the nation. So It may give a major e...
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...s assumption, We cannot risk for the nation. Thus to wrap discussion over this i...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...n, We cannot risk for the nation. Thus to wrap discussion over this issues, So...
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Suggestion: One
...nly after observing all the thing in one, all the aftereffects of what will be t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.201405152225 0.240241500013 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.135831381733 0.157235817809 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0655737704918 0.0880659088768 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0515222482436 0.0497285424764 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0468384074941 0.0444667217837 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.152224824356 0.12292977631 124% => OK
Participles: 0.03981264637 0.0406280797675 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61035725807 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0281030444965 0.030933414821 91% => OK
Particles: 0.00234192037471 0.0016655270985 141% => OK
Determiners: 0.138173302108 0.0997080785238 139% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0515222482436 0.0249443105267 207% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00234192037471 0.0148568991511 16% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2253.0 2732.02544248 82% => OK
No of words: 389.0 452.878318584 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79177377892 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.285347043702 0.366273622748 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.205655526992 0.280924506359 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.13881748072 0.200843997647 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102827763496 0.132149295362 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61035725807 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 219.290929204 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419023136247 0.48968727796 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.8006581698 55.4138127331 79% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5238095238 23.380412469 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9664547594 59.4972553346 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 141.124799967 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5238095238 23.380412469 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.674092028746 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 32.0 4.94800884956 647% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 27.0 5.21349557522 518% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 39.089362223 51.4728631049 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.68 1.64882698954 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117464713096 0.391690518653 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.135781727304 0.123202303941 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0936721469969 0.077325440228 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.736232811472 0.547984918172 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.268255012761 0.149214159877 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598122656515 0.161403998019 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405688263738 0.0892212321368 45% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.139924714692 0.385218514788 36% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0807540641975 0.0692045440612 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528345935011 0.275328986314 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469133837166 0.0653680567796 72% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.30420353982 170% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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