Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree)

The essay belongs to task II, not task I. This is the evaluation report according to task II:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'star'.
Suggestion: star
...ability and becoming a star. The sports stars are more popular than other, due to med...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...shows and marketing industries. Moreover,the important given by the government and o...
^^^^
Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'star'.
Suggestion: star
...ttitude of the sports stars. The sports stars will have aggressive mind to achieve th...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , youngsters
...ity become popular. My point of view,youngsters can take advantages from the stars. but...
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Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ers can take advantages from the stars. but should not follow them very deeply. whi...
^^^
Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...but should not follow them very deeply. which will lead to different direction of the...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...but should not follow them very deeply. which will lead to different direction of the...
^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'but', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'for example']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24907063197 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.159851301115 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.092936802974 0.0946595960268 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0408921933086 0.0501214627716 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0557620817844 0.0437548338989 127% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0855018587361 0.122226691241 70% => OK
Participles: 0.0446096654275 0.0403226058552 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63532847704 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0408921933086 0.0326793684256 125% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0817843866171 0.0861772015684 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0223048327138 0.021408717616 104% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0260223048327 0.011925033212 218% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1449.0 1933.35771543 75% => OK
No of words: 241.0 316.048096192 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01244813278 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.319502074689 0.374742101984 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.232365145228 0.28420135186 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178423236515 0.203846283523 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120331950207 0.137316102897 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63532847704 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.037074148 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53112033195 0.56093040696 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.2345110609 60.7387585426 83% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0625 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0422531569 49.517814964 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5625 127.492653851 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0625 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.814263465372 46% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 38.2990145228 49.1944974215 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.47826086957 1.69124875643 87% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207822974295 0.332605444948 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0936368067583 0.102741220458 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.107123451667 0.0668466124924 160% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.478543619542 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135793731351 0.148594505496 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784330721191 0.134430193775 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683381946033 0.0742795772207 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.338096464216 0.324371583561 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0832311350057 0.0638462369009 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141557306795 0.228012699653 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409773033343 0.058150111329 70% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.