Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Art is very essential part in most of the countries in the world. Especially, the ancient symbolic countries are focusing more on the paints of old king's picture, war scene and natural scenes. They are getting more profit in this subject. That's why the rulers of some kingdoms took more interest to improve the advancement of art livings to get financial background. but some people are not supporting this act and want the government to involve in other essential department which improve the status of citizens and backbone of the country.
Nowadays, the human beings are facing poverty, illiterate and security lagging in their home land. But the ruling parties are concentrating more on Arts and in which it gives more money to the politicians not the people.
The bribe and corruption are enormously increased among the politician and it leads to focus only on arts. They reciprocally forget the country people who are suffering from lack of food and shelter. This is ridiculous and unacceptable for those who loved the good things.
The essential part of the human life is food and shelter. The government has to be step forward to think about tremendous improvement of people's life style. The corporation has to look through the basic needs of the people and to get reached all over their country.
Next major need of the citizens are education. The government has to provide free education from lower grade to higher grade schooling. They have to announce scholarship for undergraduate, post graduate and doctorate students. It will increase the economic status of the country and support the government as well.
So the government has to take responsible to allocate the wealth in people's basic need and education, instead of arts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 289.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08996539792 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73006214308 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546712802768 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3195399112 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7222222222 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.45110844103 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115413108443 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335453888903 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375007396202 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597502553784 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268925109747 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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