Tpo 29- q1
The article suggests that Edmontosaurus, a common North slope dinosaur, could not have survived in extremely cold climate of Alaska's North slope, so they migrated to south, to more hospitable regions, and provide few hypothesis for this claim; however, the professor does not think that these arguments are correct.
First, the passage says that Edmontosaurus ate plants, but due to the cold and dark conditiond of North Slope plants could not grow there, so Edmontosaurus must have migrated to warmer zones for food. In contrast to that, the speaker declare that Edmontosaurus did not migrate to anywhere else because North slope was a little bit different in that time. Sun shines 24 hours each day for six months during summer allowing plants of north slope to grow in a suitable condition. After arriving winter , these plants died and Edmontosaurus could use the dead nutrition source.
Second, the article hypothesis that Edmontosaurus moved in herds, since many modern migratory animals like caribou live in herds, so Edmontosaurus probably migrated too. The proffesor, however, states that living in herd does not mean they have moved to new habitats. Many animals live in herd in order to be protected from predetors for extra safety.
Third, the author writes that the Edmontosaurus physical structure allowed them to travel at a speed of five kilometers per hour to reach south. the speaker mentiones that though, it is true that adult Edmontosaurus can travel with a high speed younge children of Edmontosaurus were not capable to run in that speed. Actually young Edmontosaurus slowed the herd a lot so they could not to reach their distination in time.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: First, the passage says that Edmontosaurus ate plants, but due to the cold and dark conditiond of North Slope plants could not grow there, so Edmontosaurus must have migrated to warmer zones for food.
Error: conditiond Suggestion: condition
Sentence: The proffesor, however, states that living in herd does not mean they have moved to new habitats.
Error: proffesor Suggestion: professor
Sentence: Many animals live in herd in order to be protected from predetors for extra safety.
Error: predetors Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Third, the author writes that the Edmontosaurus physical structure allowed them to travel at a speed of five kilometers per hour to reach south. the speaker mentiones that though, it is true that adult Edmontosaurus can travel with a high speed younge children of Edmontosaurus were not capable to run in that speed.
Error: younge Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: mentiones Suggestion: mentions
Sentence: Actually young Edmontosaurus slowed the herd a lot so they could not to reach their distination in time.
Error: distination Suggestion: distinction
flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
Double check spelling errors.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2 //it can reach 27 without Spelling Errors
No. of Sentences: 10 12
No. of Words: 272 250
No. of Characters: 1362 1200
No. of Different Words: 159 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.061 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.007 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.697 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.182 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.4 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.658 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.114 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
what did you like about this
what did you like about this essay?
First, there are no
First, there are no grammatical errors
Second, the content is more, and matches well to the lecture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The article suggests that Edmontosaurus,...
^^^^
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hypothesis seems to be countable; consider using: 'few hypotheses', 'few hypothesises'.
Suggestion: few hypotheses; few hypothesises
...to more hospitable regions, and provide few hypothesis for this claim; however, the professor ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nk that these arguments are correct. First, the passage says that Edmontosaur...
^^^
Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...anywhere else because North slope was a little bit different in that time. Sun shines 24 ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lse because North slope was a little bit different in that time. Sun shines 24 ho...
^^
Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...uitable condition. After arriving winter , these plants died and Edmontosaurus cou...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...could use the dead nutrition source. Second, the article hypothesis that Edmo...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ted from predetors for extra safety. Third, the author writes that the Edmont...
^^^
Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ve kilometers per hour to reach south. the speaker mentiones that though, it is tr...
^^^
Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vel with a high speed younge children of Edmontosaurus were not capable to run in...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, second, so, third, in contrast, in contrast to, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 272.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15808823529 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75596177579 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591911764706 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.094969741 49.2860985944 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.545454545 110.228320801 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364983784927 0.272083759551 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130342491046 0.0996497079465 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680012801976 0.0662205650399 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215788017568 0.162205337803 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066184396066 0.0443174109184 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.3589403974 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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