It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parent's job that to choose jobs that are very different from their parent's jobs.
Choosing the job is one of the most vital decisions in life of any person. Job helps people to achieve their goals and make their livings. Some children hesitate between choosing jobs that are similar to their parent's jobs and choosing jobs that are very different from their parent's jobs. In my opinion, it would be beneficial for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parent's jobs for some serious reasons.
In the first place, children can learn from their parent's experience. From their early childhood, children hear about their parent's jobs and their issues. If they select some job, they can use their parent's experience and evade the problems that might face them. When a family has some crucial information about a job, they can pass it to their children. For example, my friend's mother has been a manager of a big company for many years. So that my friend has always heard about her job. There was a time when my friend's mother was having problems with her job and could not solve them for a very long time. When my friend was working in the same field, some problems had faced him too. However, his mother's experience helped him to evade and find the right solutions to the problems.
In the second place, working in the same field will positively affect the relationship between a child and his parents. In most of the families where children and parents have the same jobs, relationship among members of the family is much stronger. It is in regard to having common subjects and interests to talk about. For example, my friend's mother is a doctor. They did not get on well until my friend has decided to become a doctor too. After some time, their relationship was on positive not because they had some common topics to talk about.
In the last place, choosing a job which is similar to his parent's job will provide a great future for the child. Children who continue their parent's job will not have any problems with finding a job in the future. Parents can shift their job to their children. Nowadays, finding a job is very hard, so it would be beneficial for a child to select his parent's jobs. For example, my friend's mother had a travel company. After my friend's graduation she shifted her place to my friend.
In conclusion, I want to say that it is improtant for a child to choose his favourite job. However, I recommend choosing their parent's job because children can learn from their parent's experience, it will affect positively relationship between them and their parents, it will provide a great future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...anager of a big company for many years. So that my friend has always heard about her jo...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...my friends mother had a travel company. After my friends graduation she shifted her p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in regard to, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72544642857 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3632722239 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.401785714286 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3306932782 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4074074074 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5925925926 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.96296296296 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.53042624288 0.236089414692 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183814198361 0.076458572812 240% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182283914636 0.0737576698707 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.384730300909 0.150856017488 255% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.203065957566 0.0645574589148 315% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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