Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaning how they contrast with the points made in the reading.
In this set of material, the reading passage describes a public policy about smoking and the listening passage cites facts which cast doubt on the general statement given in the reading passage.
The reading passage states that a hotly debated issue exists about public policy which contains limitations for smoking. Generally, smokers think that they are supposed to have the freedom to smoke although they know the harmful effects of smoking. According to the smokers, health risk is not only available for smokers but non-smokers are also in danger while getting into a car as well. Moreover, sta arly, shows the results of secondhand smoke. Since secondhand smoking is also harmfull, 3000 people die of lung cancer every year. Smoking bans have impact on the business as well. It influences the profits of restaurants and bars because customer needs to go out to smoke. However, U.S. always saves the rights of people who wants to smoke as they pay taxes around 7.5 billion dollars per year.
The listening passage doubt on the statement given in the reading passage by giving crucial explanations. Altough smokers think that they have the freedom to smoke, they affect non-smoker people certainly. Therefore, they do not only harm themselves but they also harm people around them. The outstanding statement about secondhand smokers is appealing as a significant factor. Due to heart attack and such diseases, quite a lot people die as a conclusion of secondhand smoker.
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- It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay? 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tatement given in the reading passage. The reading passage states tha...
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...around 7.5 billion dollars per year. The listening passage doubt on the state...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 241.0 270.72406181 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15352697095 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54419451726 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572614107884 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7504955184 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7142857143 110.228320801 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06452816374 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0403973995337 0.272083759551 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0154497193708 0.0996497079465 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255475354499 0.0662205650399 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0265995732278 0.162205337803 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208880709649 0.0443174109184 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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