Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with?
Undoubtedly, exercise plays significant role in our overall health and no one can deny its influences on people. From my point of view, it should be a required part of every school day because it has countless advantages for students. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First and foremost, exercise will improve students’ moods. According to the latest researches which were published in well-known journals, students who participate in sport activities regularly are happier than others. In addition, they are less prone to mental disorders such as depression, anxiety, etc. Results of experiments have shown that the rate of heart attacks and obesity are significantly low is students who exercise at least three times a week.
In the second place, exercise will help students memorize information easily. Besides, they can remember concepts and definitions in a more convenient way. In my opinion, participating in sport activities is a good way to reduce academic pressures on students. They can get rid of stress, if they exercise. Scientists believe that some kinds of exercise like swimming and aerobic can help people concentrate and solve challenges quickly. Based on the recent researches, exercise triggers secretion of particular hormones in brain which are responsible for solving problems.
Last but not least, participating in some sports like football and hockey has another advantages for students. They will learn how to cooperate with their friends to achieve their goals. Furthermore, students can learn how to cope with countless difficulties to become winner.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that all students should be required to participate in sport activities like volleyball, basketball and so forth. It has numerous benefits for them such as preventing from physical ailments and other advantages which I outlined above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, well, at least, in addition, such as, in my opinion, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49333333333 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0190211806 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8828684321 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5555555556 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218226761177 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554157124908 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612257440121 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107314088826 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424120431602 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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