Your local newspaper publish an advertisement asking people to help with environment projects in your area
Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help
Describe a local environmental issue that affects you
Explain what would like to do to help
And suggest how problem could be avoided in the future
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you regarding your advertisement in the newspaper and I would like to offer my help. In my district, there is a serious issue, which I wish to bring your attention.
Unfortunately, the Roxy Square in Misr EL-Gadida is getting more unclean due to piles of garbage have accumulated. It is an unpleasant scene in the square so I stopped visiting it. I suggest that to solve this issue, I intend to launch an awareness campaign to stop littering in the square. I hope to inform people the adverse consequences of disposing of waste in the park via not only posters but also social media. Furthermore, I would be happy to pick up the rubbish to clean the square. To obviate the problem in long term, I think that more bins should be placed there. Moreover, offenders should be fine for littering by the local council or police.
I hope that this assists us to make our place cleaner and better. I looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Paula
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| 2020-06-27 | Kulpreet Kaur | 95 | view |
| 2017-01-18 | Paula | 74 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...s to make our place cleaner and better. I looking forward to hearing from you. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, moreover, regarding, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65555555556 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68394862971 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0975076914 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8333333333 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16699378529 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542904033158 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734999901837 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100596944629 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107809433712 0.0580467560999 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.