Essay topics:
As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability
of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Narrator want's to say that, for solving any problem people rely more on the technology and the ability of humans to think for themselves for that problem will surely deteriorate. I agree with what narrator want's to put eye on because, the number of gadgets increasing so the use of that gadgets are becoming more and people are becoming more and more rely on that gadgets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at narrator wants to put eye on because, the number of gadgets increasing so the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 19.5258426966 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 33.0505617978 18% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 58.6224719101 17% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 307.0 2235.4752809 14% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 66.0 442.535393258 15% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65151515152 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.85026988277 4.55969084622 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41518193205 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 40.0 215.323595506 19% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 101.7 704.065955056 14% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.2370786517 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 8.0 60.3974514979 13% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 153.5 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 23.4991977007 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.21951772744 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.503442334389 0.243740707755 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.378106689796 0.0831039109588 455% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168396030162 0.0758088955206 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.503442334389 0.150359130593 335% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 48.8420337079 95% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 100.480337079 14% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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