Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument
In this argument the author concludes that the decline in the population of the artic deer is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their migration patterns across the frozen sea. To bolster the conclusion , the author cities the coincidence with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt. The argument relies on series of unsubstantiated assumptions and lacks solid evidence to support it.
Firstly, Author is assuming that the global warming have adverse effect on the population of arctic deer, as increasing temperature will result in the melting of the migration path. It may be true that the paths will melt but doesn't means that it will decrease the population of the deer. Morever, the plants which these deer eat, need little warmer environment to sustain, so it is a possibility that more plants will grow as the environment will be warmer because of global warming and population will increase and there will be less need of migration.
Secondly, the decline in population is may be due to some other unknown factors. There may be a natural disaster like earthquake in which a large portion of the population may have been vanished in a single blow. There is also a possibility that population of the species who eats arctic deer have been increased are eating more arctic deers, hence decreasing the population.
Finally, local hunters are not a very good source of information. I don't think they may have considered some reliable parameters to make such claim. It is a possiblity that there might be would have felt that there is a decline in the population of deer.
In conclusion, to convince me that the decline in population of the arctic dear is due to the melting of the migration paths the author needs some strong evidence. Without the support of evidence the decline of population could n't be justified with mere melting of the migration paths.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he frozen sea. To bolster the conclusion , the author cities the coincidence with ...
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Line 4, column 227, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ay be true that the paths will melt but doesnt means that it will decrease the populat...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ot a very good source of information. I dont think they may have considered some rel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 16.3942115768 159% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 2260.96107784 70% => OK
No of words: 324.0 441.139720559 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89814814815 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66546442327 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 204.123752495 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 705.55239521 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5817164254 57.8364921388 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.357142857 119.503703932 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 23.324526521 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 5.70786347227 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0888645223408 0.218282227539 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330949006269 0.0743258471296 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279310476664 0.0701772020484 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0507032609499 0.128457276422 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166919265876 0.0628817314937 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.3550499002 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.5979740519 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 98.500998004 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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