The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by A on Sun, 01/22/2017 - 04:34

The bar charts depict and compare the destination of British graduate and postgraduate students who didn't go to full time jobs after leaving the university in 2008.

Overall, majority of graduate and postgraduate student chose to complete further study then working part time than other activities.

Noticeably, the highest number of graduate student preferred further study with 29,665 from total of 30,000 student. Similarly, most of postgraduate students went to complete their study (2,725 from total of 3,000). Moreover, a lot of both lettered worked part time jobs 17,735 graduate, 2,535 postgraduate students. A minority of both groups worked as volunteers with only 3,500 graduate, and 345 postgraduate learners. However, there was a noticeable figure of unemployed graduate and postgraduate students with 16,235 and 1,625 students respectively.

To conclude, both graduate and postgraduate students were alike in choosing their destination after leaving college in respect to their total number of their each categories.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Suggestion: fulltime
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... to complete further study then working part time than other activities. Noticeably, t...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...Moreover, a lot of both lettered worked part time jobs 17,735 graduate, 2,535 postgraduat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, similarly, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7908496732 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91061830531 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4200542487 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239127994318 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111918443546 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731220455096 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167391414519 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728791815736 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 11.4140731707 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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