Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been free to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it comparing with other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?
These days, there have been a host of topical issues for discussion, and among them one matter of
concern is how to manage the usage of tobacco. Some people suggest that it is available for everyone
to smoke tobacco. I personally concur with this viewpoint but there should be a regulation on its use.
In fact, for those who are a party to such a view do have their own justifications. As they may try to
prove their point is that it is irrefutable that every individual in societies have their own freedom and
smoking cigarette is only their habit or hobby. Therefore, it is not plausible to ban such a pastime.
Moreover, unless the tobacco products, especially cigarettes should be made illegal, people now have
their right to use them.
On the other hand, there other people have been favor of making tobacco usage illegitimate. Excessive
tobacco use can have adverse impacts on people’s health. For example, this can lead to many deadly
illnesses such as lung cancer, heart disease. Also, a great number of potentially harmful effects on not
only individuals but also family, friends, and society are caused by drug abuse. As regards individual,
frequent drug users may turn to crime since they need to meet the increasing expense for their habit.
What is more, involuntarily breathing it in is inevitable for their family members or people close to
them.
In conclusion, I am inclined to think that despite the fact that smoking tobacco could be free to people,
the governments or authorities should impose a legitimate way of controlling on it owing to its harm to
health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Concern
...ssion, and among them one matter of concern is how to manage the usage of tobacco. ...
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...t that it is available for everyone to smoke tobacco. I personally concur with...
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Suggestion: Smoking
...ocieties have their own freedom and smoking cigarette is only their habit or hobby....
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... should be made illegal, people now have their right to use them. On the other...
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...ld be made illegal, people now have their right to use them. On the other hand...
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...ng tobacco usage illegitimate. Excessive tobacco use can have adverse impacts on ...
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Suggestion: Tobacco
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...or example, this can lead to many deadly illnesses such as lung cancer, heart dis...
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...ample, this can lead to many deadly illnesses such as lung cancer, heart disease. Als...
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...er of potentially harmful effects on not only individuals but also family, friend...
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... potentially harmful effects on not only individuals but also family, friends, a...
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...ed by drug abuse. As regards individual, frequent drug users may turn to crime si...
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... their family members or people close to them. In conclusion, I am inclined to...
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...r family members or people close to them. In conclusion, I am inclined to thi...
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...r family members or people close to them. In conclusion, I am inclined to thi...
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...smoking tobacco could be free to people, the governments or authorities should im...
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...f controlling on it owing to its harm to health.
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Suggestion: Health
...trolling on it owing to its harm to health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, as regards, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09594095941 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73345819151 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605166051661 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3222025151 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280614081996 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965657351439 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784302847933 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865178576085 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666195137839 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.