Nowadays, more and more young people hold the important positions in the government. Some people think that is a good thing while others argue that is not suitable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is undeniable that today there are more amount of youngsters hold highly responsible positions in the government. While some individuals advocate this trend, others of the opposite opinion. Personally, I firmly agree with the former due to some following reasons.
On the one hand, there are some notable drawbacks when it comes to the effectiveness of young leaders. Firstly, due to their immaturity and inexperience, young leaders are supposed to make insightful, reckless and prompt decisions. Consequently, these decisions may be detrimental to the development of the community. Secondly, since lacking of experience, some of them are self-opinionated. Therefore, when facing enormous and important issues such the economy, they hardly see the big picture and are more likely to make mistakes.
On the other hand, it seems to me that it is extremely beneficial to have young leaders in the government. The first reason is that young people are bound to jeopardize their whole life and the country’s future compared to their older counterparts who are always hesitating to make pivotal decisions. It is unquestionably necessary to any government which long to change themselves for the better. The second reason explained for my perspective is that youngsters are exceedingly energetic and creative. These traits are so valuable that not only helps to devise a master plan for the national development, but also inspires other people in society to devote their lives to their mother country.
In conclusion, though young leaders’ capabilities do not meet the requirement of their citizens, I contend that in the near future, they undoubtedly make a breakthrough in our society due to their excellent traits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...is undeniable that today there are more amount of youngsters hold highly responsible p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42592592593 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1606483855 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5548283298 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.642857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183202234595 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578499954483 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529848033599 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105435283637 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702219927073 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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