Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays the modern world and its complexity make decision-making the process more difficult for people. They tend to choose the optimize cases among various options in different situations in their life. In addition, the time has played important role in their life. Not all people concur when this issue arises. Being cognizant to the logic behind those who repudiate or endorse the legitimacy of this contention, not having any biased perception, I presume that working fast and to tolerate the possibility of mistakes during its doing is far better than slow working without any fault. Among a plentitude of the reasons in support of this assertion, the importance of the time and increase the complexity of the world could be picked out for further analysis.
To commence with, a consensus has yet to be reached; however, regarding the time restriction of human's life, based upon the statistics of different general questionnaires of sundry countries, people are unanimous about the conviction that they should balance their pace with incredible changes in the world. Today's companies are willing to increase their efficiency and do most work in the lower time. They exploit high technologies to produce more product in the certain time. People found that the improvement of the speed for decision making and performing activities guarantee their success in the high-pressure competition with their rivals. Thus, it is better for them to act fast and accept its risks of making mistakes. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what was elaborated above. The results of a study carried out by Rice University's graduate students unveiled the fact that The one hour stopping the activities in the Apple company as a prosperous company in the U.S damages to this company about 100 million dollars. This example shows the importance of the time and acting fast to increase the profit of the companies.
In addition to the reason raised above; enhancing the complexity of the world could also substantiate the justifiability of the claim made at the outset of this essay. In conjunction with public belief, the invention of different technologies complicate the facets of the life. These technologies induce people to be fast. Even though state of art devices facilitated the way to achieve our goals but made some difficult situation for people. For instance, Last year I bought new cell phone after some years work with an old cell phone. Although, this device had many application and facility but I could not work with it as well as other people. In fact, my disability caused by my delay in adaptation with the technology at the proper time. This example reveals the importance of being in pace with the changes and acting quickly to avoid further hardships.
Drawing upon the above reason, discreetly put, as far as my personal perspective on the topic is concerned, I reiterate that people should increase their pace for doing activities in spite of mistakes possibilities instead of slow working and with little faults. This choice not only causes by the complication of the civilizations but also shows the importance of the time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...ompany as a prosperous company in the U.S damages to this company about 100 milli...
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Line 5, column 564, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun application seems to be countable; consider using: 'many applications'.
Suggestion: many applications
...d cell phone. Although, this device had many application and facility but I could not work with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in fact, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 87.0 52.1666666667 167% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2640.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 519.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08670520231 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77734419937 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527938342967 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 829.8 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4139804046 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194408747574 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530924472383 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427366726602 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125306913669 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247861851193 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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