The college years are the best time in a person life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.
Some of people think that the college years are best time in their life but others not. Their thouhgts related with their experiment at college years. I think college years are best and I will explain two importanat arguments why college years are best time in a personal's life.
Firstly, If you go to college this mean you don't have to any other thing to need to do. Generally this situation is this way. You don't have responsibility to support your family as financial events so you don't have to earn money. For example, I am a student and my family meet my requirement. My single responsiblity is to learn my course to help me in business environment. And also I must graduate with good degree but this responsiblities are so easy compare with earning money for yourself and your family. That's why being a student and college yaers are the best time.
Seconly the fact that, you can meet new people in college time. You have numerous way to do this such as joining a student club and going different place with your friends. But this situation isn't easy in business environment. You are in y
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some of the people; Some people
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Suggestion: are the best
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Suggestion: are the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, for example, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 1977.66487455 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 203.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60098522167 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54029622372 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 212.727598566 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546798029557 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 618.680645161 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7753683948 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.7142857143 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35760807472 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126292554686 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784123906463 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245918072093 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036786660973 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 86.8835125448 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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