"Clearview should be a top choice for anyone seeking a place to retire, because it has spectacular natural beauty and a consistent climate. Another advantage is that housing costs in Clearview have fallen significantly during the past year, and taxes remain lower than those in neighboring towns. Moreover, Clearview's mayor promises many new programs to improve schools, streets, and public services. And best of all, retirees in Clearview can also expect excellent health care as they grow older, since the number of physicians in the area is far greater than the national average."
Clearview top choice for anyone seeking a place to retire due to physical bueaty and climiate but there is still low coast for home in area and also less tax it completely show contradiction between two things.mayor of city promise health is better and good but physicians increase in national average it also rubbish. in above argument consist lot of falws and assumption which no indicate how clearview contradict to other things.
Clearview should be a top choice for anyone seeking a place to retire, because it has spectacular natural beauty and a consistent climate. it one of the fatuous thing which mayor state. there is no evidance why they are good for climate and health. also they clearly state that fall of cost of home prices. which show there is something wrong. if there is good helath and climate then more people sholud attract and more demand in house and price sholud be increase. but in clearview it completely opposite thing which cost of home increase and tax is remain low those neighboring towns.which show that clearview city has some problem or not good facility.and neighboring towns better than clearview city.
Clear view mayor promises many new programs to improve schools, streets, and public services. it clearly show there is not such good facility for school and streets also public servies.in city such basic thing miss out then how it good for health.it show holely absurdity in city which promise for good health.if old people and family stay there there sholud be good street and public services which help him to improve there health.but mayor of city forgot about hospitaliy and medicians services in there city.
City provide good health care services. it show the crazy thing about city. if there climate is good for city then there is no need to too much number of health centers.only one or two center is sufficient for older peoples. in city also no of physician increase it show there lot of problem in city and mayor of city try of overcome such problem.
Finally, we say that above argumenthas lot of assumption and flaws.which indicate city has not so good for climate and old people. it has lack of good facility and fitness center.mayor promise is good of retier people is base unwarranted and assumption.
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Sentence: In above argument consist lot of falws and assumption which no indicate how clearview contradict to other things.
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Sentence: It one of the fatuous thing which mayor state.
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Sentence: But in clearview it completely opposite thing which cost of home increase and tax is remain low those neighboring towns.
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Sentence: In city such basic thing miss out then how it good for health.
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Sentence: If old people and family stay there there sholud be good street and public services which help him to improve there health.
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Sentence: If old people and family stay there there sholud be good street and public services which help him to improve there health.
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Sentence: In city also no of physician increase it show there lot of problem in city and mayor of city try of overcome such problem.
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Sentence: Clearview top choice for anyone seeking a place to retire due to physical bueaty and climiate but there is still low coast for home in area and also less tax it completely show contradiction between two things.
Error: bueaty Suggestion: ?
Error: climiate Suggestion: climate
Sentence: In above argument consist lot of falws and assumption which no indicate how clearview contradict to other things.
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Sentence: It one of the fatuous thing which mayor state.
Error: fatuous Suggestion: famous
Sentence: There is no evidance why they are good for climate and health.
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Sentence: If there is good helath and climate then more people sholud attract and more demand in house and price sholud be increase.
Error: helath Suggestion: health
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Sentence: It show holely absurdity in city which promise for good health.
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Sentence: If old people and family stay there there sholud be good street and public services which help him to improve there health.
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Sentence: But mayor of city forgot about hospitaliy and medicians services in there city.
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Sentence: Finally, we say that above argumenthas lot of assumption and flaws.
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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 394 350
No. of Characters: 1839 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.455 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.668 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.267 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 125 100
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
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Avg. Sentence Length: 14.593 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.838 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.481 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.319 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.48 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.09 0.07
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