When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is widely argue that whether the salary is the most important condition when finding a job or there are other factors are just as important. With me, I fully agree that salary should be the most important thing to decide if we should agree with the offer.
There are some key elements that people considers before starting a new job such as scope of work, working environment, company policy, location of work, and salary and accommodation. Based on these conditions, each person will decide if this job is suitable for them or not. Some people would prefer to the job description as their priority, while others are happy with the working environment condition. For example, a person who has family with kids will easily agree with a company which offer health care for whole family members of each employee.
Nevertheless, I would ague that salary and accommodation should be the most priority. First reason is that when the salary could fulfill the living cost, people will do not pay attention too much to their daily activities and feel free at their working time. Secondly, the salary reflects the capability of company, if they could pay higher for their staffs, it means that they are wealthy and have many jobs to do. Finally, money is the king, and nobody say that they do not work for money.
In conclusion, there are varios reasons which people need to consider when looking for a job, and the salary should put above of all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'argued'.
Suggestion: argued
It is widely argue that whether the salary is the most imp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7609561753 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40648003779 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569721115538 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7237194894 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.636363636 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228091555322 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931814722125 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060637759972 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154605873878 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765374061143 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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