Many people believe that social networking sites such as facebook have had negative impact on society.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Since the beginning of the social media, it has changed the way of negotiation. Due to the some reasons people believe that it might be bringing woe condition for whole world. It have had some negative impact on society but, to some extend.
First of all, in modern epic, to communicate with someone is not much exceptional. There are some reasons behind the usage social sites: Facebook and Twitter and so on. People can describe their culture and lifestyle to foreigners; this will come along with a better bonds and relations between two or more communities. Therefore, after communication, they will become close friends and group will be created by them to invite other candidates those who intend to talk about other one's lifestyle.
What are the negatives? the over usage of these sites will affect their health because harmful radiation of the mobile phone can affect vision,also to stay online for long period will bifurcate them to cultural and traditional values. Which will seem to be deplorable behavior during face to face conversation with natives. Although,we all know, h figure of the youngsters astray by strangers via social media. They will be blackmailed, social abused by them and this will pose threat to privacy.
Eventually, surfing on internet is resembled to addition which is inevitable, no doubt it has multifold benefits, if we will be aware about some cause that can destroy our Carrier, so we can overcome threats.
- Many people believe that social networking sites such as facebook have had negative impact on society. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others disagree. Do you agree or disagree? 61
- The news is a source of knowledge about the world. How much can we trust the journalists? What are the qualities a good journalist should have? 73
- Nowadays, people get information through news and papers, but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news. Should we believe the journalists? What qualities should a good journalist or a correspondent have? 61
- We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05416666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66921752996 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6625 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1396291085 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3076923077 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117504104168 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587055879562 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752886644336 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737571242453 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695749431087 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.