As most people spend a major of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.
What factors contribute to job satisfaction?
How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
The majority of mature people tend to spend their most time at work. Because of the type of works reflect the social position of employees, the jobs become their satisfaction. Then, once workers satisfy with something, it will become their source of wellbeing.
Community's agreement is a very convincing factor to give effect on employees' happiness of what they do. In India, there are two separate jobs according to gender. The majority of Hindustani male rely their income on engineering jobs, while the most-wanted jobs for female is education. Those two distinctions choices of jobs do not merely on their will but it is constructed by a social judgment that gives strong effect on jobs satisfaction. The India-man engineers are justified by people that they are smart and intelligent, and having the high-cognition ability will raise their status. In another hand, the Hindustani female will always happy to be judged by the group that they are having full of compassion as well as smart, therefore becoming educators sill satisfy their willingness.
From above paragraph, the writer insists that social clarification becomes the factor of worker's happiness, nevertheless inside work environment will also determine their satisfaction, as such, bosses complement, and colleague's truthfulness. Both factors can promote the workers installation at a better position, then the employee's salary will increase.
above all, those factors somehow do not parallel to the workers' expectations. Once, a wise man says that the more ability you gain, the more responsibility you have. That could be meant that once manager becomes president of a company, he will hold much burden than the previous position, so he will spend more time on work rather than resting or with family. As a result, the stressed feeling will overcome and happiness will run away. Those are only expectation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...ery convincing factor to give effect on employees happiness of what they do. In India, th...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'educators'' or 'educator's'?
Suggestion: educators'; educator's
...on as well as smart, therefore becoming educators sill satisfy their willingness. From a...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
...thfulness. Both factors can promote the workers installation at a better position, then...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...allation at a better position, then the employees salary will increase. above all, those...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Above
...en the employees salary will increase. above all, those factors somehow do not paral...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l run away. Those are only expectation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, while, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29431438127 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89654119519 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0333327137 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209431007613 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764052229496 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643956319211 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136079740009 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743731125879 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.