Children should never be educated at home by their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary time, some people argue that parents should not bestow education for their children at home, while others consider entirely different reasons as its perspective.
It is rather dubious that children are never acquired education at home by their parents because they should be educated by teachers who are master in pedagogy’s method. School and course are the good places if children would like to study. Nowadays, children obtain knowledge not only in a school but also in a course to increase their literacy. Both school and course generally provide complete facilities such as laboratory room and expert teachers for their students. According to research by several observers, good for children simply study with teachers in the school and in the course because teachers have more ability about subject and more experience to teach them. Consequently, the teachers in the school and course are the right people to teach students than their parents.
Although the research stated that students should simply study with the right person in a school and in a course, it also informed that relationship between teachers and their students is not as simple as it looks. Apparently, it turns out that other domains such as good relations, become the core factor of instruction. Parents normally have close relationship with their children than teachers. For instance, parents could spend quality time with their own children in the weekend such as playing games or watching television together which these activities create both parents and children closer, furthermore when children have a good relationship automatically easy to receive knowledge by their parents at home. Even though teachers have more ability than parents but they have not more time to create a good quality time beside in a class. Thus, parents should transfer education for their children at home.
In conclusion, although teachers have more knowledge and experience to teach students, it is just one of many available domains. In the end, depend on children to receive knowledge.
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Sentence: In the end, depend on children to receive knowledge.
Suggestion: In the end, it depends on children to receive knowledge.
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