Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Technology has a significant influence on our lives. Today, we use technology on almost every aspect of our daily lives and obviously cannot avoid its influence. One very important example is computers. Some people believe that computers have made our lives more complex and stressful while others disagree. In my view, though purchasing and maintaining computers are somehow expensive, computers have created a better quality of lives for many reasons.
The first reason is that computers get us a way of get information through the internet. One of so popular source to get any information by using our personal computer. Moreover, our personal computer provides us with so many options to use information through its softwares and applications. For example, when I have working as trainee in one of health care facilities since 3 months. One of job training duty is to do a seminar for any subject that related to the work flow. Even though I come back from work at 6 PM every day, I did not faced any difficulties to get the information I need for the job. However, my personal computer provides the opportunity to get access to the internet and searching for multiple sources that I could use it in doing my job . In addition to, When I download the necessary information, I can organized and arranged it accurately and plainly by using one of the computer’s application. Finally, If I need to print it out, I could do so easily. On the other hand, If the computer does not existed in my life, I would have to go to library to looking for books or articles. which is so inconvenient. As you can see, computer has provide us with unlimited resources of information at any time, or any place conveniently and easy than it was before.
The second reason is that computers have improved the quality of our health. Today, health care providers have used computers in recording, monitoring, and even dispensing medications to patients that resulted in minimizing medications errors, and provide the ability for physicians and pharmacies to follow up patients status. For instance, last year, I worked as a pharmacy technician in a Walgreens pharmacy. When I started working at first, I was overwhelmed by how much computers have involved in the pharmacy work flow. I informed later that by using computers in the pharmacies, medication errors have been minimized tremendously. In other words, using computers helped pharmacists and physicians to improve and ensured that patients got the right medication . Therefore, I was using computer during my work in the pharmacy: in the prescription entry into the system, and reviewing the patient history records, and finally dispensing the medication. This experience taught me that computer plays a crucial part in the pharmacy work flow. This example is one of so many other example that computers have create better quality of life.
In short, without doubt computers have make our life much better, much more convenient. Not only do improve the quality of our health, but they also give us a quick and so easy way to get information. Computers have revolutionized our lives and we should all support their continued development and use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2702.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 522.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17624521073 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20875935352 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507662835249 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 860.4 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2492543818 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.074074074 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7037037037 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256678848517 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795813373019 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828900520024 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176618512082 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433823836487 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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