Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
When it comes to the question whether it's more beneficial to travel internationally or domestically, everyone will have their own answer given their individual characteristics such as their needs, interests, and budget. From my perspective, given same amount of travel time and budget, I deem I can benefit more from traveling in my own countries. I will detail my reasoning as follows.
The most critical reason is time. As a traveler, I would prefer spending more time exploring my destination rather than getting stuck at the security checkpoint, sitting in the airplane, and waiting in a long queue at the custom, which are often associated with international travel. For example, if I have a week of vacation, instead of spending 2 days on the way, I could choose a destination that may only take me couple hours to get there that means I have 1 more extra vacation day.
Secondly, more time at the destination enables me to explore and interact with the people and surroundings more. I personally prefer a more in depth traveling experience than a superficial glance of tourist attractions. International trip is often meticulously organized because of the language barriers. In comparison, as I travel in my own country, I can freely tour around my destination, chatting to local people, enjoy the street food that makes the trip a lot more interesting.
Lastly, international travel can cost travelers significantly more comparing to a domestic one. Admittedly, cost of a trip is often determined personal choice and preference but a lot fees, such as visa and currency exchange, are often inevitable. In addition, to save money in another unknown country can be a lot more challenging.
In all, despite the fact that international travel may leave me an exciting memory, as a traveler I feel I benefit more from traveling within the country when considering time, money and travel experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
When it comes to the question whether its more beneficial to travel internati...
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...I will detail my reasoning as follows. The most critical reason is time. As a t...
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...eans I have 1 more extra vacation day. Secondly, more time at the destination e...
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...makes the trip a lot more interesting. Lastly, international travel can cost tr...
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...country can be a lot more challenging. In all, despite the fact that internatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11501597444 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14542217422 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571884984026 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3164979003 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.357142857 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326033970202 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107329616659 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103561138012 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191098932278 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881415235281 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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