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IELTS essay: Training is far more important than providing broad-based education. To what do you agree or disagree with this statement.?
Education is very important in everyone's life. It sets the direction towards the future of the person. While training for the work is also important because it gives opportunities to a person to perform effectively in the professional life. However, broad-based education of any course is as essential as training for this course. Therefore, every person gets education and then training because they both are important to be successful in the field. So we cannot give priority to education on training and vise versa.
If a person only gets training for the job without education. So,...
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