Many times people are afraid to come forward and share their IELTS Experience because they were not able to get a good band score. what do you think what could be the reasons for this?
Many people who didn't get a good band score don't want to talk about their IELTS Results at first place. I think that there are many reasons contributed to this activity but the most significant and underlying factor is fear which creeps into our feeling and make us feel uncomfortable throughout the day. The origin of this situation seems to stem from many reasons and we are going to discuss them in this essay today.
Perhaps fear accompanied with anxiety is an inevitable factor especially in people with low faith. Human being get nervous by seeing too many people around them because either they are coming to the examination hall after a period of time or they have not got much self-confidence to tackle the exam pressure. As a result, People are unable to make full utilization of their time efficiently and effectively.
Another factor is uneasiness which remains throughout the exam. It can be seen during our live exam where we often put a lot of pressure more than the required which builds up the pressure and often lead us to commit mistakes in the exam.
To sum up, I would say that fear and uneasiness are the most important factor which really stops people to talk about their IELTS experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, i think, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7641509434 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53826185192 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632075471698 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0419055758 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.222222222 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227942704732 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086998729992 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677261006147 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120775650469 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822918382463 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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