Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up."
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that parenting is a heavy lifting task which rather requires more of your time, energy and attention. While some people believe that the father should be accountable for the upkeep of their children, others argue that it is the responsibility of the women for bringing the children up. I believe that the accountability of the children goes to their mother only.
On the one hand, some people think that the father must devote their free-time to their children. This is because they want their housewife to sit and relax after a struggling day at home. For example, according to a recent report by the UK government, more than 50% of fathers takes the rein of the household chores after a long tiring day at work. Furthermore, they should also help their children in their day-to-day tasks assigned by their school teacher.
However, I would argue with above opinion by saying that women should be taking full care of their children throughout the day. This is because when their father comes at home after a laborious day at work, they rather have very less energy left to take care of themselves. For instance, according to a recent report published by the UK government housewives tend to work for only 3 to 4 hours throughout their day as compared to their husbands. Furthermore, women can also enhance their knowledge by teaching their children on the various subjects like english and maths etc. As a result, it becomes quite obvious that mothers have plenty of time available at their disposal to assist their children grow.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that it becomes quite difficult for fathers to take care of their children due to the non-availability of their time, so the duty of taking care of children should fall in the hands of the mother.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82736156352 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61493940552 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517915309446 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1676958137 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127235799455 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592497071966 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617868904707 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979340351739 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470782018462 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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