2 weeks ago you bought a radio from a local branch of a well known chain of shops. It did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. You have waited a week and still it is not ready.
Write a letter to the shop complaining. Tell what has happened and how you feel.
Ask them to repair the radio very soon or supply you with a new radio.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to complain about a radio I bought 15 days ago. When I choosed it, I was sure about the quality of your braanch. In fact, my family has often come to your shop to buyelectronic devices, in the last ten years.
Unfortunately, when I first used it I couldn't find a single radio station broadcasting. that was really disappointing, because I had promised a radio as gift to my son, but when he first tried to use it, it just didn't work. I took the device back to you last monday morning and Bill Murray, the guy at the front desk, told me it would be fixed in ...
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Sentence: If you can't repair it, I at least expect you to supply me with a new one.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to I and at
Sentence: When I choosed it, I was sure about the quality of your braanch.
Error: braanch Suggestion: branch
Error: choosed Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In fact, my family has often come to your shop to buyelectronic devices, in the last ten years.
Error: buyelectronic Suggestion: No alternate word
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No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 40 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 21 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 9 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 206 200
No. of Characters: 791 1000
No. of Different Words: 128 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.788 4.7
Average Word Length: 3.84 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.257 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 40 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 21 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 9 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.962 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.463 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.668 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.262 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4