The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems...so who do u think who should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organization or each individuals?
Undoubtedly, there are a lot of things going on that will pose threats to all living creatures of the world. Many of these threats are caused by us and I strongly believe that these are our responsibility to fix it. This essay will shed a light on various problems and solutions.
The world is like our home and it is our duty to maintain, protect and fight back against all those problems that may cause our life in a danger. Of course, there are different levels of a role for all of us as per our knowledge and power. The government is the large and powerful body who can contribute much as compared to others as they have a power and resources. They can make a system to decrease global warming, pollution and educate their citizen to aware what is going on.
Similarly, an organization can create events, campaigns and engage with people to spread awareness of the problems. The big organization can even collect donations to get required resources to fight back with the problems. Besides this, an individual can do a lot from their side. They can help their government, organization and participate in social awareness program. Parents can teach good discipline and culture to their children which will help them to be a better human in future.
To sum up, everyone has a crucial role to work on to solve various issues like social, climate and others. They are all equally important to save their home, society, and world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 478, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ich will help them to be a better human in future. To sum up, everyone has a crucial ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, similarly, so, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72222222222 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61406452356 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.6794063632 50.4703680194 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113821720976 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364731761758 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0244760150071 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589675289908 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209562600567 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.1685393258 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.0 Out of 90
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