Write a letter to your manager to tell him/her about some company documents that you lost while travelling with them, please say
What were the documents?
Where and when did you travel with them?
Suggest a solution for this situation.
Dear sir,
I regret to inform you that I have lost the asset verification report of Shail mall while I was moving from our office to the client office. This was the part of the reports of asset verification audit conducted in the month of September 2016 throughout the Adani buildings in Ahmedabad.
I was carrying this report from our office to the client office for the final representation of audit done. However, I realized about its loss when I open the file at the waiting room. Soon I realized, I contacted the office if I forgot it at my desk and checked in my car also. But, under my surprise, I could not find it anywhere. Now, we have left with the solution to get a scanned copy of the duplicate report that we usually handover to admin manager of a respective building as an acknowledgment of process done.
I would request you to contact Mr. Karan Grover, the admin manager of Shail mall building to provide us the soft copy of our final presentation and reference.
Awaiting for your action and prompt reply.
Yours faithfully,
Bhumika Suryavanshi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...got it at my desk and checked in my car also. But, under my surprise, I could not fi...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...ur final presentation and reference. Awaiting for your action and prompt reply. Yours ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72486772487 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.711370486 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597883597884 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2398248405 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113875990157 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417824486488 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025844900219 0.0603063233224 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06529229342 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00673122417302 0.0580467560999 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.