ISSUE(8)Claim: In any field---business, politics, education, government---those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership
Leadership functions as a valuable and indispensible component of a balanced development, especially in this era of technology and industry boom leading to increasing management demand. Leaders of an institution are often liken to bellwether who leads the organization or company to appropriate future and rational reasonable operation, will definitely exert a broad and profound impact to every aspect of the organizational development , unity and inner solidarity. Nevertheless, to purport that leaders in power should step down after five years in any given field to guarantee the revitalization t...
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Sentence: It is true that in many cases extended period in power are often characterized by centralization and personalization of power.
Description: The fragment cases extended period is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace extended with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Sentence: Even though such claim above appears somewhat convincing, we cannot assumes too hastily that in any given field, ranged from business, politics, education to government, those in power should step down in five years or in certain other time interval.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to cannot and assumes
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Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 548 350
No. of Characters: 2904 1500
No. of Different Words: 300 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.838 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.299 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.088 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 213 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 164 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 130 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 102 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.842 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.509 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.421 0.12
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.514 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.066 0.07
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