Nowadays, people are get married and have their children after the age of 30. is it a positive or negative development? Give your own example based on your experience?
Over the recent years, people are getting marry at their exact age, but to make a generation after the age of 30. Apparently I think this opinion says that a negative development, owing to that if the women's age above 30 there will be a less chance for conception rather than still-births. Hence, these factors affected throughout our life moreover, next generation to be in hassle.
To begin with, the healthy living people considered upto the age of 30 at contemporary. For a while, due to the developmental criteria follows some predictions and rules in order to prevent some physical and mental disabilities of the people. Moreover, the enormous amount of people dominated their life styles to obtain high economy and job prosperities indeed, they are overwhelming for fashion trends, furthermore, they are attending the pubs, club parties etc. Despite being, they are cajole to buy a new cars and gradually addicted to luxurious life, eventhough they are runs the drugs and other poisonous materials like cocaine and malathione. To be specify, one of my friend, who runs business after his post graduation, he got married at the age of 27 and she also her age is same, but they don't have children it seems, because both of them are motivated by drugs , now they are jobless indeed, they got affected some serious illnesses too.
Arguably, the negative development occurs in their life, owing to that they are physically ill and many family menaces happened. Although, it is conspicously hypothesised, it leads to divorce may occurs. Inspiteof, they are making conflict between them, but externally they are very happy with everything even though, they are unsucceed in their career. However, they are threatened for physically, mentally as well. Finally, they will go for suicide, and they won't achieve anything properly.
In reterospection, do not cross over the age of 30 for conception, instead it is till 28 this scenario is medically proven, hence we should give health education to such like people and make aware of them , into the conscience behaviour.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: cajoled
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion:
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... such like people and make aware of them , into the conscience behaviour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07917888563 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82684296483 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633431085044 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8566917278 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.714285714 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158700754876 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568487868448 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724116061311 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10267112055 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501007974742 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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