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Should children be taught sex education in school?
In some countries, sex education is remained as a peculiar term for children consumption, but in fact, there are many cases of sexual abuse which affect them. While I accept that school, where children spend most of their days, is the most proper place for them to learn about education.
Firstly, the teaching of sex education for children is intended to prevent them from sexual abuse. In the past, sexual abuse merely affected the adult people, but nowadays, the condition has rapidly changed. Bored with same old stories, the people who commit sexual abuse begin finding a new style of their cr...
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Sentence: Furthermore, with the comprehension of sex education, the children will learn about feelings such as love, care, sad, happy hate, and disappointment are begin to occur.
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Sentence: Furthermore, in case the sexual abuse has happened, the children will not feel embarassed to report it to their parents.
Error: embarassed Suggestion: embarrassed
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