Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Traveling is one of the best hobbies in my life. I have been traveling for a long period of time and have some experiences in it, so I know which one is better for me. Although many people would like to travel alone, claiming that they become free and more independent during their journeys, I strongly believe that traveling with your close acquaintances is better than alone.
Initially, I am a sociable person who enjoys spending time with his close friends, so if my friends are with me, time passes more interestingly and happily. If I am alone, I can not feel freely since it is a foreign area and there is nobody to communicate with, thus I get confused and time becomes annoying. In contrast, my friends have almost the same characteristics as me and time is more enjoyable while we are together. The example I am going to provide, is a compelling demonstration of this idea. Last year me and my friends traveled to Spain to take part in a soccer game event, we were encouraging the same team and we had also the same cloths of this team. We spent time excellently, since we could make jokes, lough in a loud voice, tell each other stories and so on.
Additionally, I feel more safe and insurance while there is some of my relatives or friends with me in a strange area because if I have any problems, there is somebody who can help me at that time. When you are on trip in a strange environment and you face some sudden outcomes, there are cases when you can not overcome it alone and you need someone’s help, so I firmly believe that having friends with me on a trip can change many things in good or bad situations. My example is based on the idea. As I mentioned above we went to Spain last year. And I would never be able to get around the city because I do not master Spain language, thus if my friend did not come with me I would not be able to travel more confidently and conveniently.
In summary, I chose to travel with my acquaintances because time passes enjoyably and better with others, besides, it is more safe since there is someone to help you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... life. I have been traveling for a long period of time and have some experiences in it, so I k...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tions. My example is based on the idea. As I mentioned above we went to Spain last...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, thus, while, i feel, in contrast, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 7.30242825607 233% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 22.412803532 254% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1373.03311258 124% => OK
No of words: 385.0 270.72406181 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41298701299 5.08290768461 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64077552918 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 145.348785872 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496103896104 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 419.366225166 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.116997792494 855% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.398131132 49.2860985944 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.266666667 110.228320801 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06452816374 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183460415986 0.272083759551 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642620214815 0.0996497079465 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572440843299 0.0662205650399 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132393880591 0.162205337803 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676675310938 0.0443174109184 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.2367328918 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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