Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?
In modern world the level of economic development of countries depends on many factors and it strongly differs from each other. As a result of this difference, countries can be classified as developed, developing and poorer countries.
Nowadays it is a subject of discussion if wealthy nations must share their wealth, such as food and education among poorer nations or if there is no need for this at all. A different view claims that looking after them is the responsibility of their own government.
In my opinion, the government of wealthy nations must help poorer countries and I can expl...
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