51)Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Success is the one thing everybody the world dream about. There are many ways to approach towards success. Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risk or chance, others believe in careful planning. We all want to achieve success so we live a comfortable life- have financial freedom, build beautiful house, drive a nice car. However, although success can be achieved but it won't come easy, i believe that there should be careful planning.
First of all, to achieve our dream goal, one should know his/her strength and weaknesses and later plan according to it. For every goal t...
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