54) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Every people in this world are different and have different way of external appearance. It is god's creation to be different in their own ways. One should never judge a person by external appearance, it is impossible to assess someone's character by only looking to their appearance, it hurts their feelings and it is impossible to become friends. We should always think, what if others do the same thing with us. First we should try to be perfect and assess our mistakes, behavior, no one have right to comment or criticize on others interests and tastes.
First of all, external appearance is always misleading, people are born with different level of mentality and beauty. Every day we see lot of different people around our world, every one wants to be different from each other. For instance, if you see a siblings or a twine siblings, there will be unimaginable changes in appearance and looks, the way they walk, talk, think, interests and many more varies inversely. He/she may be intelligent but wants to be simple in appearance.
In addition, always situations are not same for people, there may be personal or professional problems in life. They might be happy or sad for different reasons. For instance, if you meet a person who has not dressed properly, might be sad the day you met, that may be misleading and it will be a wrong judgement by you. But that person may have good sense of humor which is not seen on a particular day. A person who has a pretty face and wears beautiful clothes may not have same kind of heart you imagine of.
Furthermore, some people have a habit of judging people by their wealth. They think a rich person will be good by character, smartness, care for others, have helping nature but this may be false. But some rich people are the most stingiest people on earth who don't have any concern on others needs or life. In contrast, medium or average earning have more interest in helping others and caring their feelings.
In short, appearance is always deceptive and temporary. Everyone's life style, standard of living, tastes and interests change a lot. Everyone do mistake by judging others appearance but at the end friendliness, concern about others feelings are the permanent needs.
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Sentence: But some rich people are the most stingiest people on earth who don't have any concern on others needs or life.
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Sentence: Everyone do mistake by judging others appearance but at the end friendliness, concern about others feelings are the permanent needs.
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