Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In the 21st century, whilst tourism has become one of the fastest growing industries in the world, its impact on culture has brought about a controversial debate. Both positive and negative sides of tourism from cultural perspectives will be discussed in this essay.
From a positive perspective, the existence of tourism provides economic incentives for the preservation of cultures. This is done through attracting tourists, which incentivises governments to invest in and preserve their history and culture. Moreover, it helps to increase an awareness of indigenous culture which otherwise would...
- After leaving school or university, young people should choose a job or career that they love, rather than one that pays the best salary. To what extent do you agree with this statement ? 44
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 82
- Some people think that women should take part in the military or the police force but others oppose to this idea Discuss both views give your own opinion and examples 83
- Some people think teachers have a greater influence than parents in the development of a child s intelligence and social skills Do you agree or disagree 95
- Some people think that travel helps gaining knowledge but others think that TV and internet play an important role in gaining knowledge Discuss both views and give your opinion 88
Sentence: This is done through attracting tourists, which incentivises governments to invest in and preserve their history and culture.
Error: incentivises Suggestion: ?
flaws:
Sentence Length SD: 3.905 7.5
No. of Words: 246 350
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 246 350
No. of Characters: 1326 1500
No. of Different Words: 150 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.96 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.39 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.82 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.905 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.591 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.078 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5