The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

A glance at the provided line chart reveals a stark contrast between the United Staes and the United Kingdom in terms of the volume of the petrol each consumed. Apparently, the proportion of disposable income the wealthy in the UK spent on petrol was larger than that of the two classes, while the US showed a completely different trend.

More specifically, the poorest segment of population in the UK spent well under 1% to approximately 3% of their income on petrol. In the middle income class, the figure was considerably higher, ranging from 3% to roughly 4%. In addition, the percentage for ...

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Sentence: Apparently, the propotion of disporable income the wealthy in the UK spent on petrol was larger than that of the two classes, while the US showed a completely different trend.
Error: propotion Suggestion: proportion
Error: disporable Suggestion: disposable

Sentence: In addition, the percentage for the reichest reached a peak of 4 and then declined steadily among the weathier residents in this category.
Error: weathier Suggestion: weather
Error: reichest Suggestion: richest

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