The line chart shows how much drivers in the USA and the UK spend on fuel. Petrol purchases are divided by three group of welfare (poorest, middle-income, richest) and are shown in percentage of income.
Overall, people in the United States of America spend less part of their income on gasoline richer they are and vice-versa in the United Kingdom - richest people pay more then poorest ones for gasoline.
The poorest people should spend approximately 4-5.2% of their income on petrol that is almost equal to percentage of middle-income group which is also in a range between 3.9-5%. At this point, spending gradually falls from 3.9% of income to near 2.5% for richest drivers. It can clearly be seen that poorest part of the USA more affected by gasoline prices then the richest ones.
The UK line starts at 0.5% of income for petrol for poorest people and steadily increase until it hits the peak with 4% for the richest group and an significant decrease onward, thus richest people there spend 8 times bigger part of their budget on gas then the poorest do.
- Some countries have introduced a law to limit working hours for employees. How this law can be introduced?Do you think it’s a positive/ negative development? 61
- The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
The line chart shows how much drivers in the USA and the UK spend on ...
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Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'group' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'groups'.
Suggestion: groups
.... Petrol purchases are divided by three group of welfare poorest, middle-income, rich...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: '- the richest'.
Suggestion: - the richest
...re and vice-versa in the United Kingdom - richest people pay more then poorest ones for g...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...nited Kingdom - richest people pay more then poorest ones for gasoline. The poore...
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Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... peak with 4% for the richest group and an significant decrease onward, thus riche...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8097826087 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39524730291 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5317340169 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.428571429 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132344236234 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670584619392 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578753979419 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956871545594 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054083613736 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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