private companies that support and carry out scientific researches are spending more than governments in these days .do the advantages of this development out weight the disadvantages.explain and give reasons.
Private companies has given myriad medicines,gadgets,instruments etc., to the human race.However,it is pondered that private companies that endorse and tote out specific researches are spending huge amount of money than the government .I reckon that pros and cons of private companies will be agitated before we reached to a final conclusion.
To commence with,whole globe is enriched with various beneficial items like communication devices ,medicines and so on.This can be attributed to private companies.For instance,scientist has invented the cure of cancer and made the medicines in private companies which are being given to all the humans around the world.Also,emergence of free market economies has encouraged companies to invest high projects to assist human kind.Apart from this,due to the presence of private due to presence of private companies employment of the country rises.These companies are accompanied by numerous workers who get suitable wages.Moreover,if private companies indulge in the large projects then government can fully concentrate on the welfare of society .
Ulterior,as every rose is accompanied bye thorns,thus private companies too have disadvantages.First and foremost is that products produced by companies are sometimes sold to the terrorist.As it can be clearly seen from this example,recent report claimed that Pakistan terrorist used chemical bombs in kargil war on Indian military which were illegally made by the private research company sold to the terrorist. Moreover,when products produced by the private companies reached market ,they are very expensive and poor people cannot afford them .Thus,at that time government holds greater priority.
In a nutshell , in my personal pragmatic cognizance no doubt private companies have demerits but we cannot unlearn the facilities provided by them to the human kind.Thus,their cons over weight the pros.
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sorry in last line i have done mistake ,there i mean ... Thus,their pros over wight the cons. sorry for my mistake!