in many countries, the number of teenage drivers who are involved in car accidents is a serious problem.
what do you think are the causes of this problem? what solutions can you suggest?
the essay
" For many years, experts have voiced a concern over the safety of teenager's driving. Nowadays, this concern has become more legitimate as a considerable number of teenagers has been incriminated in many road traffic accidents. Many factors attribute to this phenomenon, but the most important is the teenager's behaviour. This essay is going to discuss this issue as well as the possible solutions to put an end to it.
Roads allover the world have been suffering from the high number of motor-vehicle accidents caused by teenagers. That is why psychologists have studied this phenomenon and have attributed it to several factors. Firstly, teenage years are the years of impulsiveness. Accordingly, accidents caused by youth may be brought by their recklessness and careless behaviour. Needless to say, this is due to innate traits of them. As they are immature enough to judge and to take decisions in unexpected situations as in accidents. Since it is well known that youth lack the experience and the proper judgement in difficult situations compared to adults. Furthermore, the lack of proper driving training is an important point to consider. this was shown in India where the highest number of road traffic accidents by teenagers took place there. Traffic experts there have found that the lack of driving principles was a considerable risk for accidents among teenagers drivers.
Nevertheless, it is not insurmountable problem. Because various solutions can be implemented to overcome it. for instance, increasing the age of getting a driving licence is a cost- effective step to put an end to this issue. Adopting this policy should ensure that drivers are mature enough to be careful during driving. A salient example is Japan which made the age to get a driving licence 20. After implementing this strategy the rate of care accidents there have plunged to an extremely low level. Additional strategy that could be beneficial is providing adequate training courses before getting the driving licence. Doing so would make sure that drivers are qualified enough to drive.
In conclusion, although road traffic accidents by teenagers became a growing problem, it could be controlled. it would be a good idea if aforementioned strategies were applied to reach this goal."
" For many years, experts have voiced a concern over the safety of teenager's driving. Nowadays, this concern has become more legitimate as a considerable number of teenagers has been incriminated in many road traffic accidents. Many factors attribute to this phenomenon, but the most important is the teenager's behaviour. This essay is going to discuss this issue as well as the possible solutions to put an end to it.
Roads allover the world have been suffering from the high number of motor-vehicle accidents caused by teenagers. That is why psychologists have studied this phenomenon and have attributed it to several factors. Firstly, teenage years are the years of impulsiveness. Accordingly, accidents caused by youth may be brought by their recklessness and careless behaviour. Needless to say, this is due to innate traits of them. As they are immature enough to judge and to take decisions in unexpected situations as in accidents. Since it is well known that youth lack the experience and the proper judgement in difficult situations compared to adults. Furthermore, the lack of proper driving training is an important point to consider. this was shown in India where the highest number of road traffic accidents by teenagers took place there. Traffic experts there have found that the lack of driving principles was a considerable risk for accidents among teenagers drivers.
Nevertheless, it is not insurmountable problem. Because various solutions can be implemented to overcome it. for instance, increasing the age of getting a driving licence is a cost- effective step to put an end to this issue. Adopting this policy should ensure that drivers are mature enough to be careful during driving. A salient example is Japan which made the age to get a driving licence 20. After implementing this strategy the rate of care accidents there have plunged to an extremely low level. Additional strategy that could be beneficial is providing adequate training courses before getting the driving licence. Doing so would make sure that drivers are qualified enough to drive.
In conclusion, although road traffic accidents by teenagers became a growing problem, it could be controlled. it would be a good idea if aforementioned strategies were applied to reach this goal."
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teenagers'' or 'teenager's'?
Suggestion: teenagers'; teenager's
...enomenon, but the most important is the teenagers behaviour. This essay is going to discu...
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Line 2, column 729, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ning is an important point to consider. this was shown in India where the highest nu...
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...de the age to get a driving licence 20. After implementing this strategy the rate of ...
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Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...rowing problem, it could be controlled. it would be a good idea if aforementioned ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25956284153 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96305019492 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2589831586 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.2083333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95833333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261006031633 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713083198201 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711564405084 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1613133228 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842593441101 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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