IT is important to ensure that children with a wide range of abilities and from a viriety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school.
to what extent do you agree or disagree?
When the beginning of time, there are few things important than children's education. Some would suggest that in order to giving the best learning conditions for children's progress, talented children and rich ones should be put in special schools. However, in my view, they should continue to be mixed with each normal children at mainstream schools for three main advantages.
Some might would argued that special schools for high-class children or those with broad of abilities could give more personal success and creating more experts for societies because of high standards of learning. Howev...
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Sentence: Some might would argued that special schools for high-class children or those with broad of abilities could give more personal success and creating more experts for societies because of high standards of learning.
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