Today more and more young children have mobile phones. Critics say that this is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree? What is your own opinion?
It is true nowadays; younger generation or even smaller kids under the age of 16 are using mobile phones a lot. I agree to some extent it is important and useful to use mobile phones, however there are many drawbacks of using mobile phones.
I agree to some extent, it is very useful for the youngster to have mobile phones, fewer students need to travel for two to three hours to reach school or colleges for them it is important to have phones. It is easier for their parents to know the exact whereabouts while traveling.
However, most of the children misuse mobile phones. Mobile phones are ...
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Sentence: In summary, I agree it is useful to use have mobiles for some younger people, however, for some, it kind of addictions which impacts their development.
Description: A verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to use and have
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Suggestion: Refer to it and kind
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