There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter
- Describe the event.
- Say why you think he/she would be interested.
- Suggest an arrangement to meet there with him/her.
Dear Sara,
I am sorry I have been not writing for such a long time. I am writing to invite you for next Iranian food festival on May.
Last week I saw a billboard that show an advertising about especial food festival. It's opening on 12 of May and it takes two days. Everyday has special activity. In the first day, people can taste different food from all part of country. As you know we have a lot of culture in our country and each of them has especial foods.
In the second day, people can get around and cooking for each other. I know how much you like to cooking and try new recipe. Besides, in night they plan to have firework. I think it is great and you will enjoy watching firework.
I can buy a ticket for you and coming after you and you are welcome always to stay with me.
With love,
Mari
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Sentence: Last week I saw a billboard that show an advertising about especial food festival.
Description: The fragment that show an is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace show with verb, past tense
flaws:
No. of Words: 152 200
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.089 7.5
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Characters: 605 1000
No. of Different Words: 98 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.511 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.98 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.044 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 24 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 12 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 3 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.089 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.356 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.581 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.174 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4