Given is the diagram illustrating the process of producing coffee as well as preparing for sale in supermarket and retailers.
It is evident from the information provided that there are 11 steps involved in the whole production, ranging from picking coffee beans to packing into jars of the final products
Prior to the initial stages of processing, having picked from the trees, coffee beans is dried in the sunshine and roasted at an appropriate temperature then. At the fourth stage, they would be cooled quickly. The obtained beans were ground later into grain to mix with hot clean water, af...
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Sentence: At this point, a freezed mixture was formed and then the grinder would ground it.
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Sentence: Equally importantly, the freezed liquid at subsequent step needed to be dried in an vacuum environment to avoid oxygen.
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