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A teacher's ability to relate well with students is more important than excellent knowledge of the subject being taught.
I agree with the statement that it is more important for a teacher to relate well with students than excellent knowledge of the subject being taught. nevertheless, I believe knowledge is an indispensable factor while teaching in any formal education. On the other hand, it can not denied that the teachers, who relate nicely with their students are remembered forever. On the way of proving the statement, I recall my teachers who had shown both of the characteristics, which impells me to reorganize my meticulous observations.
First of all, the teacher who knows the importance of relating...
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Sentence: I agree with the statement that it is more important for a teacher to relate well with students than excellent knowledge of the subject being taught. nevertheless, I believe knowledge is an indespensable factor while teaching in any formal education.
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Sentence: First of all, the teacher who knows the importance of relating well with students must be a knowledgable person, who uses this strategy to impart the maximum information to his/her students.
Error: knowledgable Suggestion: knowledgeable
Sentence: For instance- my mathematics teacher in my 8th grade, used to greately realte with her students during the class, that helped her to know better about the impression her students carried towards her subject.
Error: realte Suggestion: relate
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Sentence: In a nutshell, I must say teachers who relate with their students well are more knowledgable than the teachers who do not care about the achievement or better understanding of the students inspite of having excellent knowledge in their subjects.
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Error: knowledgable Suggestion: knowledgeable
Sentence: Thus, the teachers realtion with the students not only creates more interest in the subject they teach but also paves the way for the students to choose thier career in that field that leads to more research and development.
Error: realtion Suggestion: relation
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