Reading is more important for developing imagination and language skill than television. Do you agree or disagree?
Today, reading became more popular, people choose reading than watching television. They believe that reading make imagination and language skill better. While some people believe that reading is the right chooses to expand their imagination and language ability, I have different opinion.
Some people prefer to read a book than watch a movie which is it based on the same stories. They argue that it more fun to image every detail story in a book that sometime cannot present in a movie perfectly. Reading could stimulate people's brain to create illustration from their books and it is important...
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I want you to check this: P1
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P1 L1: "Today, reading became more popular" should be "Today, reading becomes more popular"
P1 L2-3: "reading make imagination" should be "reading makes imagination"
Make sure you have checked the grammatical mechanics before posting your essay(s), specially for the basic sentences.
Today, reading became more popular
Today, reading becames more popular
reading is the right chooses to
reading is the right choice to
Sentence: They believe that reading make imagination and language skill better.
Description: The fragment reading make imagination is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: Some people prefer to read a book than watch a movie which is it based on the same stories.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to it and based
Sentence: They argue that it more fun to image every detail story in a book that sometime cannot present in a movie perfectly.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, post-determiner
Suggestion: Refer to it and more
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.375 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.43 7.5
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 262 350
No. of Characters: 1356 1500
No. of Different Words: 132 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.023 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.176 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.567 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.375 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.43 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.403 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.569 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.154 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5